08/07/2014

Carpe Diem Haiku, Chiyo-Ni ''in an unknown sky''

autumn's bright moon
however far I walked, still afar off
in an unknown sky

Intriguing haiku with beautiful concept - and last line, presented as inspiration. Following is my attempt.





summer thunderstorm
sound of the sky on the rooftop
as for the moon, long gone





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